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page horizontal Medium
shot, full figures, establish the whole kitchen. She's sitting at the kitchen
table. A cup of tea is sitting there; so is an open toolbox. He's' kneeling
in front of her, having sawed three of her manacles off and is working on the
last one on her ankle. She is wearing a one of his sweatshirts, very baggy
on her, and a pair of his jeans, one sock on (the unshackled foot), the other
sock draped over a knee. She has a towel wrapped around her head in a turban.
He's focused on sawing the manacle, not looking at her.
Caption:
1 :02 AM. Fitz:
Donna, I'm going to have to leave soon. Panel
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page Pull
in close, cropping Fitz and Donna, so we can clearly see the sawing of the
manacle.
Fitz:
Listen carefully. The people who are after us control or influence almost everything:
the government, the police, even the church.... Donna:
Who are they? Panel
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page Medium
shot, full figure, from 3/4 overhead. The manacle is off and on the floor.
He's kneeling in front of her, in a submissive position, rubbing her bruised
ankle. He's looking at her ankle. She's looking down at him.
Fitz:
An exclusive little club... some of the most powerful people in the world.
Donna:
Like you? Panel
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page Close
up of Fitz's hands on her slim, girlish ankle.
Fitz:
Yes. I was a member. During the last couple of years, though ... well, let's
just say I haven't seen eye to eye with the others. This
isn't the kind of club you can just quit... so I started making contingency
plans. Panel
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page Longish
medium shot. We can see the whole house, the whole car, and a little environment.
Balloons to the house.
Fitz:
I have houses like this allover the country... nondescript cars under fake
names kept ready and waiting for me in hundreds of towns... caches of gold,
diamonds, currency... and weapons. And a few people I can trust. Panel
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page Long
medium shot, through the window. He's kneeling in front of her, putting the
sock on her foot. She's sitting woodenly in the chair.
Fitz:
Even so, we were very lucky to get away. Donna:
Why did they... do that to me? Panel
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page Bust
shot, close on her, starting to cry again. She's clutching her shirt, fist
clenched. He's standing; she's framed by the side of his body and his arm.
He's got the manacle in his hand.
Fitz:
Every year there's a meeting in a private chateau near Aspen. They hold a little
ceremony. A young girl is brought in... and you know some of what happens to
her. Donna:
Why me?
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page Close
medium shot, cropped to Fitz' waist. Shoot at Fitz, who's turned away from
Donna, walking toward the camera. He's putting the manacle in his jacket pocket.
Donna swings around to look at him, an unbelieving look on her face.
Fitz:
Choosing you as the sacrifice was their way of punishing me. Donna:
Just 'cause you were my mother's friend? Panel
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page Close
up of Fitz, looking down, his back to Donna.
Fitz:
Years before you were born, long before she married your father, I was in love
with your mother. I lost her because I was busy building an empire... but I
couldn't forget her. Panel
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page Longish
medium shot. He's standing at the kitchen table, putting the tools away.
Fitz:
I stayed in touch, I helped out as much as she'd let me. I even got myself
on the board of the college where your dad taught -- he got his tenure because
of me. Panel
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page Close
medium shot, diagrammatical. He's turned to her. She's looking down, he's looking
at her.
Fitz:
I was devastated when she died. You were ten then, right? Donna:
Uh-huh. Panel
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page Close
medium shot. He's turned toward her; his crotch is at about her head level.
He's lifting her chin, gently. She's looking up at him, stunned.
Fitz:
You... are the spitting image of your mother. Do you know that? Panel
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page Straight
on close up of Donna, her chin raised at the angle his hand left it. lips slightly
parted, very wide-eyed. Her expression is as if a light bulb has turned on
over her head. Silent.
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