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21
Panel
1
2/3
page horizontal Shoot
from high helicopter's pov, over the house. Show the whole house and immediate
environs. Armed men are leaping out of vans, two other military-style helicopters
are swooping in, men descending on rope ladders.
Panel
2
2/9
page Shoot
from behind Fitz. He is sprinting towards Donna's body, carrying the torch
with one hand, gun drawn in the other, whirling to fire at three guys wearing
military/police type outfits who are bursting in through the door.
Panel
3
1/9
page Couch
pov. Fitz tosses torch towards the couch, while firing and being shot at.
Page
22
Panel
1
2/9
page Shoot
from 3/4 above the living room. We can see the whole scene: Fitz in the middle
of the room, shooting at the soldiers are rushing in from the front door and
from behind him. The torch has landed at about Donna's hand level in front
of the couch. Some soldiers are headed toward the couch.
Panel
2
1/9
page Shoot
straight at the couch so that we can see her limp hand and her torso but not
her head. The flames are just starting to catch at the magazines on the floor.
Panel
3
2/9
page Diagramatical
(Kirby-like) shot of Fitz having rolled to his back, blasting away as a bunch
of guys pile over him, but not landing on him. See layout.
Panel
4
1/9
page Match
panel 2. The flames are getting bigger, the tips just reaching a bit higher
than the seat of the couch.
Panel
5
2/9
page Shoot
from slightly outside the house at the kitchen comer (about where the driveway
bends). A bunch of soldiers have blasted through the kitchen wall (but leaving
the sink counter intact). The blast hole frames the panel. Invading soldiers
in the foreground; in the background we can see the pileup around Fitz... we
can see Fitz, down on the floor, obviously shot up a few times (leg, shoulder,
etc.)
Panel
6
1/9
page Match
pane/ 2. The flames are now engulfing Donna.
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