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Special Thanks to R. Burgoyne for scans of the art!
Unpublished Script
FATALE #0
"Who is Like Unto the Beast"
Pages 21 & 22
(Art by J. G. Jones)
Page 21

Panel 1 2/3 page horizontal

Shoot from high helicopter's pov, over the house. Show the whole house and immediate environs. Armed men are leaping out of vans, two other military-style helicopters are swooping in, men descending on rope ladders.

Panel 2 2/9 page

Shoot from behind Fitz. He is sprinting towards Donna's body, carrying the torch with one hand, gun drawn in the other, whirling to fire at three guys wearing military/police type outfits who are bursting in through the door.

Panel 3 1/9 page

Couch pov. Fitz tosses torch towards the couch, while firing and being shot at.


Page 22

Panel 1 2/9 page

Shoot from 3/4 above the living room. We can see the whole scene: Fitz in the middle of the room, shooting at the soldiers are rushing in from the front door and from behind him. The torch has landed at about Donna's hand level in front of the couch. Some soldiers are headed toward the couch.

Panel 2 1/9 page

Shoot straight at the couch so that we can see her limp hand and her torso but not her head. The flames are just starting to catch at the magazines on the floor.

Panel 3 2/9 page

Diagramatical (Kirby-like) shot of Fitz having rolled to his back, blasting away as a bunch of guys pile over him, but not landing on him. See layout.

Panel 4 1/9 page

Match panel 2. The flames are getting bigger, the tips just reaching a bit higher than the seat of the couch.

Panel 5 2/9 page

Shoot from slightly outside the house at the kitchen comer (about where the driveway bends). A bunch of soldiers have blasted through the kitchen wall (but leaving the sink counter intact). The blast hole frames the panel. Invading soldiers in the foreground; in the background we can see the pileup around Fitz... we can see Fitz, down on the floor, obviously shot up a few times (leg, shoulder, etc.)

Panel 6 1/9 page

Match pane/ 2. The flames are now engulfing Donna.


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