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In
Quantum - As Michael nears the man the creatures tormenting him
all turn and hiss at Michael like so many spidery cats. The loner
guy is grabbing for the clerk behind the counter.
Poor
It makes me sick!
Nooo! The one called Glimmer comesss!
Hsss!
Sssstay awaay!
Leave usss!
You're causing this poor
man a bit too much trouble for me to do that.
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In
Quantum - Michael nabs one of the creatures off the guy and it
squirms frantically in his fist. The loner guy has caught hold
of the counter person's uniform and is yelling at them.
Poor
Guy: What's the matter with
you people?!
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In
Quantum - Michael reaches through the poor guy and grabs another
demon as he squits the first one in his fist and the others leap
away in all directions. The guy is letting go of the counter
person's uniform and has gone from outrage and
anger to whining.
Poor
Guy: You're all a bunch of
hypocrites!
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Real
World view. The miserable guy is collapsed on the counter in
despair, but the violence has gone out of him. Michael is coming
out of quantum.
Poor
No one really cares.
You'll feel better now.
For a while anyway. I can't solve your problems for
youÉ
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Michael
is putting some coins on the counter. The manager Lionel is
there behind the counter. The other counter persons have backed
away. The guy is leaning on the counter looking downward, now
ashamed.
Maybe you should just get
some dinner and relax. Some people do care. There's plenty
of good ones, you just need to find them.
It's okay, Lionel. He'll be all right now.
Okay, Michael, if you say so.
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Michael
has returned and is sitting down at the table where Fatale has
waited.
What was that about? Where did you go?
Did youÉhelp that guy?
One of those levels of reality
that I was telling you about is filled with many
ills that are created and fed by mankind's fears and in turn prey
on and increase them.
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2
close
up on Michael.
I've learned to enter what
I call the Quantum Plane and destroy these things. But
they grow back in time if the afflicted individual doesn't change
what caused them in the first place.
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Fatale
looks sad and distracted at what Michael is saying to her.
This is a busy time of year
for me. So many people feel so much more isolated and
alone at Christmas time.
I know what you mean about that. My mother
was all alone and in hiding the Christmas before
she died. I think about what she must have felt like twenty
four years ago tonightÉ so lonely and afraid.
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4
People feel isolated and
alone that even in a crowded city like New York. Especially
so. And there are those who revel in their fear and misery, that
thrive on it.
I do what I can.
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Michael
is getting up to leave. Fatale is smiling up at him. They've
bonded.
I'd better get back to it.
It was very nice meeting you.
It's been very odd meeting you, Mister
Alexander but ,somehow, I like you.
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Fatale
is leaving the McDonalds, Mercy is waiting for her outside looking
happier than before. Fatale, of course still has the shopping
bags.
Michael just told me that you were all right. He oughtta
know. He's a smart one that Michael.
He's an amazing man, that's for sure.
He said that he spent his whole life learning to
see the Quantum plane, but how do you see these things?
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2
Close
on Mercy and Fatale. Fatale is looking at Mercy nonplussed.
Me? Oh, I'm crazy.
Oh.
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3
Fatale
and Mercy are walking down the street.
Where are you going now, Mercy?
Yea, I must walk through the valley of the shadow a'
death. But I don' fear no evil.
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Fatale
and Mercy continue to talk on the sidewalk near McDonalds. Three
large mean looking men are approaching from behind Mercy.
Why don't you come with me? I'm going
to meet my family and friends for dinner and I'd
love it if you came.
Oh, no no. Old Mercy don't belong in polite company.
Fatale
leaves Mercy but feels bad and goes back
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One
of the men jostles Mercy as he passes her.
Thug
Watch it,
you old bat!
Don't you be pushin' me, you thugs!
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The
man turns to Mercy threateningly. His friends flank him, cutting
Mercy off from Fatale. Fatale comes running back. She is wearing
a coat and gloves.
Thug
Shouldn't
be so quick to mouth off. Old woman like you.
I'm not afraid of thugs like you!
Hey! Leave her alone!
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2
The
thugs have moved in closer on Mercy and are grabbing her and
thug 1 is speaking sneeringly to Fatale and shoves her back hard.
There is a truck on the street behind them. Like a Ryder truck
.
Thug
You stay out
of it, Chickie!
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Fatale
is struggling to her feet and the men are hustling Mercy into
the back of the truck. She is half out of her coat and is pulling
off one glove off her free hand with her teeth. The shopping
bags are slung onto the free arm that is out of
the coat. The little purse is still slung across her
body.
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4
Fatale
leaps for the truck as the back doors are closing and it is pulling
away (shopping bags still on her arm). She is grabbing for one
of the thugs who is hanging on the back of the truck.
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